Man, this is excellent but you could go so much further with this piece. Maybe add the melody at 16 seconds with the repeated section you've got at the end or something.
thanks neo! and i might consider using your idea. or atleast put into practice lol
I feel like if you added some melody to this and changed the phrasing around a bit, it would be a great song.
I would but i no longer have the project file for this song =( but i will use that advice for me next piece
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